You were hard, unwelcoming,
allowing only the familiar
or the most intrusive to flourish,
then clinging, hanging onto everything.
In the right light, your forest
full of hanging vines, brambles
and poison ivy resembled the banyan
where I played one magical year.
But you were nothing like the rich, red
island soil that nurtured sweet fruit.
And while the sunlit vaults of your pines
recalled my fine old Colorado school,
benevolent ravens roosting above,
attic trusses serving as branches,
your woods offered no haven,
tripping me, ripping flesh at every turn.
Now, Virginia Clay, in a new landscape,
I remember you as a Lothario, full
of broken promises, my inability to mold
or conform to you shaping who I am today.
Via #Trees-Times-Past and #dVerse
Very nice. I say bravo!
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Such a powerful letter full of recognition expressed in the final line — that which we cannot mold in turn is what shapes us. Beautiful! And I like how the ravens are a part of the scene and yet not its focal point.
Thank you for your kind words!
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