Experimental

Tones of a tuba
sounding more like wind and rain
map a promenade,
seemingly impossible
progressions across the stage.

Via #TankaTuesday (promenade and map)

See the full performance here.

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Colleen Chesebro says:

April 10, 2018 at 11:13 am

I love your musical Tanka, Denise. It tells a mini story. Perfect! ❤

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- bilocalalia - talking about living in two places says:
  
  April 10, 2018 at 12:21 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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Janice says:

April 13, 2018 at 4:35 am

Your tanka goes well with the dance performance and the surprising sounds created by a tuba. (I just had to check the video to hear what the poem described)

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#TANKA TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE, “Dance & Command,” NO. 79 RECAP, #SYNONYMSONLY – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer says:

April 15, 2018 at 11:08 pm

[…] Experimental – ….Bilocalalia…. […]

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#TANKA TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE, “Dance & Command,” NO. 79 RECAP, #SYNONYMSONLY | Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry says:

October 29, 2020 at 1:39 pm

[…] Experimental – ….Bilocalalia…. […]

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