White porcelain, gleaming tile floors,
the smell of solvents prickling the eyes,
a reflective door without a fingerprint,
and below it, three sets of feet, a pair
of sneakers dangling high, hanging pants,
high heels in the middle, back to the door,
and squeezed in somehow, another
sneaker of another little boy
balancing on one foot.
“Espera, don’t touch anything. Don’t
touch anything. Everything
is dirty.” A bigger boy, looking
at the floor, stands by the sink
holding four coats, staying clean.
I have written a surprising amount about bathrooms. I rewrote this old poem for the dVerse prompt.
I’ve written a couple poems about my bathrooms not public facilities. One was calling to me when I heard a strange noise and walked into the bathroom to find the toilet bowl empty of all water.
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https://vhosking.wordpress.com/2015/01/13/poetry-at-work-day-2/ It was strange.
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Gotta admit, this makes me think how the strangest interactions I’ve seen and heard happen in public restrooms. Crazy stuff!
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An unusual setting but still the muse calls and we must write about it. I was wondering at the backstory though. Thanks for joining in.
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I see a lot of moms having to bring their little boys into the ladies room when there’s no “family bathroom” available.
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Yes! You’ve got it! Have observed scenes such as this before with families crowded into bathrooms so little children don’t wander off. My worst bathroom experience was when I was in Australia and needed to use the old toilet at the Car Race track. After finishing and flushing I found a huge cane toad, highly poisonous, under the rim!
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Be glad it wasn’t a snake! At least cane toads are only poisonous if you eat them. 😀
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You’ve certainly created a vivid setting!
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Been there, done this …. you describe it perfectly.
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Meticulously observed and always suggestive of another meaning. Well done.
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Thank you!
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I can identify with this scene very well – nicely conjoured!
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So evocative! And I’m so glad not to have to do that anymore – I have twins, so it was a double nightmare.
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A TOTALLY unique take. Perfecto!
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Such a familiar scene. Public restrooms are not equipped for a mother and her children. They’ve thought of everything else, why not family restrooms?
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I see them in a few places now.
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Poetry is the statement of power that sets the soul free, to be, exactly who you are — and in being just that, to introduce your truth to the world!..
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Very profound!
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I can relate to this scene well overall – pleasantly invoked!
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Thank you!
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