We have no prairies
To slice a big sun at evening – “Bogland,” Seamus Heaney
Who has complained of life-giving trees?
We have.
Who squints to transform pines to plateaus?
We do, searching for sunsets, harvest moons,
Northern lights, fearing encroaching woods;
no horizon.
It seems these days (I hate those words),
stumbling blind is the best we can do,
a shadowy future just one step away.
We have no horizon.
This adapted ovillejo is a gloomy look from the perspective of a bad attitude. Some days I just miss the desert, especially when some spectacular phenomenon is occurring on the horizon.
But to leave in a lighter mood, have you heard about the Arizonan talking to the Virginian? The desert denizen sighed, “I just feel so claustrophobic with all these trees around!”
The Virginian drawled, “Honey, I know exactly what you mean. When I’m out West, I feel absolutely nekkid!”
The theme was suggested by today’s dVerse prompt, and takes us from concrete to abstract in ten lines.
The Heaney quote set the stage for insightful and sobering poetry that followed! Great write.
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I like the echoes of Heaney, and the two very different perspectives offered. The imagery really brings the scenes you describe to life!
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this made me wonder – why do you hate those words, Denise?
❤
David
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I feel that they were overused in pandemic advertising and campaigns, along with “in these difficult times” and “unprecedented times.”
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“Stumbling blind is the best we can do” – true, Denise, very poignant.
I love the conversation between the Arizonan and the Virginian afterwards, thanks for sharing 😀
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I think we need both… sometimes the wide view, the horizon, sometimes we need to look closer helped by the wood.
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The unstable voyage of each day. You’ve captured it well.
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Gorgeous, gorgeous write! 💝💝 Such depth in your words especially; “Who squints to transform pines to plateaus?”
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