Lonely old men hunker in the shade,
spooling out a line, light glistening
on the spinner, trolling for a nibble.
“I remember …” “When I was young…”
each memory a juicy worm, and I,
wishing for more time to listen,
leap to my death.
Inspired by dVerse and GoDogGoCafe.
This is to explain why, whenever my husband leaves me alone for a moment in a public place, he comes back to find me talking to other men!
Oh my goodness….first reaction…second….brilliant, really brilliant, so well done…
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Thank you!
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So easy to be captured…
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I wasn’t expecting that! You used great bait to draw me in!
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So cleverly written! A great place to be though….surrounded by shared memories.
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Love it! A writer’s soul can help herself.
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