via #dailypost and Carrot Ranch flash fiction contest
When Mattie Brown’s mother said “if wishes were horses…,” Mattie started wishing on more than stars. Today she was in a field of dandelions when Jeb’s voice startled her. “Whatcha’ wishin’ for?”
“A dime to see Shirley Temple,” she mumbled. She hoped nobody would notice her in conversation with “one of those Thompsons”.
“I’ll have more than a dime after I sell these at the steamboat dock,” he said, indicating a burlap bag with his walnut-stained fingers. “I can give you one.”
Mattie jumped up, scattering dandelions. “I can earn it! I’ll help you sell them. Let’s go!”
Ah, Denise, that’s a delightful flash! You wove several influences upon the girl and revealed her willingness to act upon her dreams. I enjoyed your writng!
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Thank you for your kind words and the inspiration!
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